From 4235ed7a5067f05dc627c1311390a80b9c259a5d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: null Date: Sun, 17 May 2026 20:56:42 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] fix: tighten service and industry copy to match original site tone (batch 8.8, issue #85) --- src/data/industries.js | 8 ++++---- src/data/services.js | 14 +++++++------- 2 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/data/industries.js b/src/data/industries.js index 463acfa..2ca3416 100644 --- a/src/data/industries.js +++ b/src/data/industries.js @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ export const industries = [ id: 'healthcare', name: 'Healthcare', shortDesc: 'HIPAA-compliant communications and infrastructure for medical providers', - fullDesc: 'Healthcare providers need secure, reliable communications that protect patient data while enabling seamless collaboration. Our solutions are designed specifically for healthcare environments, with HIPAA-compliant options and features that support clinical workflows and patient care.', + fullDesc: 'Patient experience, scheduling, and staff coordination with a focus on compliance.', icon: 'heart-pulse', painPoints: [ 'HIPAA compliance and data security', @@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ export const industries = [ id: 'retail', name: 'Retail', shortDesc: 'Connect stores, teams, and customers with scalable retail communications', - fullDesc: 'Retail businesses need communication systems that scale from single stores to national chains. Our solutions help retail organizations connect stores, manage teams, and engage customers with reliable voice, data, and digital communication tools.', + fullDesc: 'Connect stores, back office, and support teams while improving customer interaction.', icon: 'shopping-cart', painPoints: [ 'Multi-store coordination', @@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ export const industries = [ id: 'manufacturing', name: 'Manufacturing', shortDesc: 'Industrial communications for production floors and distributed operations', - fullDesc: 'Manufacturing operations require communications systems that work in challenging environments and support both office and production floor needs. Our solutions bridge the gap between office systems and industrial operations.', + fullDesc: 'Reliable office-to-plant communications including paging and alerting for production environments.', icon: 'factory', painPoints: [ 'Production floor connectivity', @@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ export const industries = [ id: 'education-finance', name: 'Education & Finance', shortDesc: 'Secure, reliable communications for schools and financial institutions', - fullDesc: 'Educational institutions and financial organizations need communications systems that balance accessibility with stringent security requirements. Our solutions help these organizations communicate effectively while protecting sensitive data.', + fullDesc: 'Campus communications and customer-facing communications in tightly regulated environments.', icon: 'landmark', painPoints: [ 'Data security and privacy', diff --git a/src/data/services.js b/src/data/services.js index 7f2a211..b8aaf2a 100644 --- a/src/data/services.js +++ b/src/data/services.js @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ export const services = [ name: 'Unified Communications', shortDesc: 'Modernize your business communications with seamless integration', homeDesc: 'Stop juggling separate phone, video, and messaging systems. One platform, one bill, zero headaches.', - fullDesc: `Transform your business communications with our comprehensive Unified Communications solutions. We help you integrate voice, video, messaging, and collaboration tools into a single, intuitive platform that works across all your devices and locations. + fullDesc: `Voice, meetings, and messaging that keep your people connected without adding operational friction. As an 8x8 Certified Partner, we have deep expertise in implementing and supporting 8x8 UCaaS solutions, ensuring our customers get the most value from their investment. Our 8x8 expertise includes VoIP implementation, cloud PBX migration, unified communications deployments, and ongoing system support. @@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ Our solutions include Cisco Webex, Cisco Unified Communications Manager, and 8x8 name: 'Contact Center', shortDesc: 'Deliver exceptional customer experiences with modern contact center solutions', homeDesc: 'Your customers reach a real person faster. Lower wait times, happier callers, better reviews.', - fullDesc: `Create exceptional customer experiences with our contact center solutions. Our cloud-based platforms help you manage customer interactions across phone, email, chat, and social media channels with powerful analytics and workforce management tools. + fullDesc: `Customer engagement built with routing, reporting, and workflow control that support real operational performance. As an 8x8 Certified Partner, we deliver enterprise-grade contact center solutions with 99.999% uptime reliability. Our 8x8 expertise includes contact center setup, omnichannel routing, AI-powered agent assistance, and real-time analytics dashboards. @@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ We support Cisco Webex Contact Center, 8x8 Contact Center, and other leading pla name: 'Managed Support', shortDesc: 'Expert IT support with proactive monitoring and rapid response', homeDesc: 'Your IT runs itself. 24/7 monitoring catches problems before you even notice them.', - fullDesc: 'Our Managed Support services provide comprehensive IT help desk and infrastructure support. With 24/7 monitoring, rapid response times, and dedicated support engineers, we ensure your technology infrastructure runs smoothly so you can focus on your business.', + fullDesc: 'Consistent support, clear accountability, and lifecycle management that keep your environment stable long after deployment.', icon: 'life-buoy', benefits: [ '24/7 proactive monitoring', @@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ We support Cisco Webex Contact Center, 8x8 Contact Center, and other leading pla name: 'Consulting & Training', shortDesc: 'Expert guidance and training for communications and infrastructure', homeDesc: 'Get a clear plan, not a sales pitch. We map your needs, implement the right solution, and train your team.', - fullDesc: 'Our consulting and training services help you make the most of your communications infrastructure. From strategic planning and implementation to hands-on training, we provide the expertise your team needs to succeed.', + fullDesc: 'Straightforward guidance and practical training that help your team use technology with confidence and discipline.', icon: 'graduation-cap', benefits: [ 'Strategic technology planning', @@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ We support Cisco Webex Contact Center, 8x8 Contact Center, and other leading pla name: 'Infrastructure Cabling', shortDesc: 'Professional structured cabling for reliable network performance', homeDesc: 'Bad cabling means dropped calls and slow networks. We build it right the first time.', - fullDesc: 'Our infrastructure cabling services ensure your physical network foundation supports current and future needs. We design and install copper and fiber optic cabling systems that provide high-performance, scalable connectivity for your entire organization.', + fullDesc: 'Clean structured cabling that gives your business the physical foundation for reliable communication and growth.', icon: 'link', image: '/assets/cabling.png', benefits: [ @@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ We support Cisco Webex Contact Center, 8x8 Contact Center, and other leading pla name: 'Wireless Access', shortDesc: 'Enterprise-grade Wi-Fi solutions for reliable mobile connectivity', homeDesc: 'Wi-Fi that just works — everywhere in your building. No dead zones, no complaints.', - fullDesc: 'Our wireless access solutions provide robust, high-performance Wi-Fi coverage for your entire facility. From site surveys and design to installation and optimization, we ensure seamless mobile connectivity for employees and guests.', + fullDesc: 'Business Wi-Fi designed for usable coverage, dependable performance, and fewer support headaches across your environment.', icon: 'wifi', benefits: [ 'Enterprise Wi-Fi design and deployment', @@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ We support Cisco Webex Contact Center, 8x8 Contact Center, and other leading pla name: 'Local Networking', shortDesc: 'Robust local network infrastructure for business-critical operations', homeDesc: 'A network that doesn\'t go down when it matters. Secure, fast, and built for your workload.', - fullDesc: 'Build a reliable local network infrastructure that supports your business operations. Our networking solutions include routing, switching, firewall configuration, and network segmentation to ensure secure, high-performance connectivity throughout your organization.', + fullDesc: 'Switching and routing built for stability, visibility, and secure local network performance.', icon: 'network', image: '/assets/local-networking.png', benefits: [